A bit more revision of the same opening chapters. More than anything I enjoyed reading these scenes over again. The funeral is in 3 days.
I ended up doing a little revision, but of the same opening chapters I've already done. I worked late, from about midnight until 2am. The scenes were melancholy, aching. I think that's good, but not quite sure. Still, it's writing progress.
My step father barely woke today. He's starting to slip away from us. I needed a distraction. I had reached out to a couple of people from Twitter to review/beta/CP Kingdom. Though one turned down an offer to CP, she offered some helpful feedback about the opening of the book. I'm going to use that … Continue reading Day 51: February 20, 2017