Day 152: May 31, 2017

I made some minor character motivation adjustments, mostly in dialogue, though also some tweaks in setting descriptions and other various descriptors. It was all mostly subtle references and word choice. I also worked a bit on sentence structure and those kinds of clean up things I noticed.

The two chapters today were:

  • The Burn and the Road
  • The Ax and Haplin Station

You’ll notice the naming pattern of the chapters. Because of the dual POV structure, with Daron being the first part of each chapter and Aubrey the second, each chapter name refers first to something happening to Daron and then to Aubrey. (Which is setup with the first chapter name, Daron and Aubrey).

Word count yesterday: 124,584
Word count today: 124, 517

 

 

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