Sunday. I thought a lot about the story today. Pondered it. Wrote some notes down in Keep. “Why doesn’t Aubrey figure out back in Chapter 2 blah blah blah?” “If Daron comes across X in Part 7, then how come he didn’t do Y in Part 3?”
You know, plot hole nonsense, that makes you want to scrap the whole thing and write something else entirely. I hope the light of day makes me calm down and stop thinking these 115,000 words aren’t all worthless bunk.